Tuesday, August 16, 2011

What do you think of my story so far?

I like. I makes you want to know more. Like how did she go crazy? What is the asylum really like? I want to know more about the other girls. And how could her husband put her in a place like that? Does she miss her son? Make sure to explain later in the story. But over all, it's pretty good. Keep going with it. And post more if you need help! Good Luck!

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